Just some formatting changes, Make the logo on the first one a little smaller, add a little line above it. I'm not feeling the typeface for "Charcoal tastes better." I like the idea though.
I wasn't super excited about the caveman reference at first...but after I read it a few times, I see how it works. I like it. Again, play with different typefaces and add a line above the logo.
Yeah I didn't really think about taglines when i did them. And the typeface is the last thing I'm gonna worry about, because it's the last thing piete will worry about
Just some formatting changes, Make the logo on the first one a little smaller, add a little line above it. I'm not feeling the typeface for "Charcoal tastes better." I like the idea though.
ReplyDeleteI wasn't super excited about the caveman reference at first...but after I read it a few times, I see how it works. I like it. Again, play with different typefaces and add a line above the logo.
Yeah I didn't really think about taglines when i did them. And the typeface is the last thing I'm gonna worry about, because it's the last thing piete will worry about
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